Very good variety of locations. Lighting in some is a lot darker than others. Not consistent. Lip syncing could be improved as well. Lots of good, imaginative shots though, and fits genre well.
Lighting could be improved in some shots, and the people acting sometimes look uncomfortable. Location shots are good but maybe less use of the garage door as you can tell it is a garage door. Love the use of the paint as it works really well with the type of band you are. Choreography was a good idea but in practise didn't work so well. I think if you want to use dance you have to do it with a lot of enthusiasm and a lot of space. Mae and Laura
Very good variety of locations.
ReplyDeleteLighting in some is a lot darker than others. Not consistent.
Lip syncing could be improved as well.
Lots of good, imaginative shots though, and fits genre well.
Lighting could be improved in some shots, and the people acting sometimes look uncomfortable.
ReplyDeleteLocation shots are good but maybe less use of the garage door as you can tell it is a garage door.
Love the use of the paint as it works really well with the type of band you are. Choreography was a good idea but in practise didn't work so well. I think if you want to use dance you have to do it with a lot of enthusiasm and a lot of space.
Mae and Laura
The video is editing very quickly which is a good thing for the type of 'pop' song you've chose.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of variety in the shots/ locations.
some of the lip-syncing is a tad out.
The girls you have used in your video look like a band.
From mattie and steph