Advert Feedback Analysis

I got quite a bit of feedback for this piece of work, but nothing to negative just improvements. The photograph I have chosen for this page works well with the genre im using for the music video but the only worry is will I be able to keep it up to this standard. I will try my best to get it to the best standard as possible to get the best grade I can so some elements will have to be included when thinking about how to make this happen. I will think about the sort of clothing I want my girls to wear that best shows their individual styles and what looks the most fashionable. I want the photos to look good quality so I will add effects if needed to give extra brightness to it.

I have took a few photos already and the idea I have of three individual shots of the girls and them putting them together could be a good idea but it will need a lot of work done to make sure it comes out right and looks professional. I have already took photos of two of my members with different background and I think they look quite fashionable but I might need to rethink the style im going for as it really needs to link back to my digipack style as the two products have to look similiar so the target market know who they are. I will use different outfits in the photographs and see what looks best so then I have more of a range to chose from.

To make sure the advert looks as professional and believable as possible I will have to add all the finishsing touches which includes extra text at the bottom of the page including their twitter account so viewers can follow them as well as their facebook and officle website address so everyone can access them. I will also have a record label and logo shown at the bottom of the page. I will experiment with the postitioning of the additional text, but for now I will stick to the font I have already used on the digipack and the size im thinking of using. I dont want the additional text to be to big as the main text, for example the names of the two new songs need to stand out compared to any other text on the page as this is the most important information.

I could also add the ratings from a magazaine which realtes to the target audience which could be Pop or heat magazine parhaps, I need to do some more research on this particular part. I do believe that the additional text could make the page look over crowded and take the main focus away from the page so I have to try and keep to a quite simiplictic approach. I will also show the data the album is out which is another big part of information that will be shown in a bigger font to the other text. All the extra information im adding to the advert will make it look more genuine which is one of the most difficult parts to create and make it believeable.

I will use the fonts I have chosen to use on the digipack on the advert as well as this will relate both of the products back to each other which will make it easy for the viewers to know whos album and advert their looking at. To improve the copy from above I will make sure the text is lined up together and looks neat and tidy on the page. I am happy with the text font and the sizes iv used but when adding the additional text I might have to make some of the text smaller just to be able to fit on to the page and keep it look neat. I like how iv positioned it but it could become bottom heavy once iv added the additional text. I will do experiments with where to put the text until I find the perfect position for it so the final design looks to the stand I want.